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3 ago 2016
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Inglês (EUA)
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Yoshiko bought strawberries at a supermarket, and at her home, she washed and put them into water in a pot.
Adding some sugar, she mixed it for about 30minutes with 9a rice ladle.
When it became as sticky as jam, she added some fresh lemon juice in it.
After the completion, she compared it with the jam she had bought at the supermarket.
The jam she made herself was much more delicious.
Which made her so happy as to come to want her mother taste it.
When she brought it to her mother, her mother praised her.
"Wow this is delicious "
Which brought the confidence to her that it was really good.
Then, she came to want her grandparents taste it.
So she also brought it to them.
But they hadn't eaten any bread let alone jam.
At the first time they saw the jam, they told that it was creepy and like blood.
Yoshiko made an explanation that it was made from strawberries by herself.
Firstly they wouldn't eat it, but after the explanation, they tried eating it with a piece of bread. soa natural?
Yoshiko bought strawberries at a supermarket, and at her home, she washed and put them into water in a pot.
Adding some sugar, she mixed it for about 30minutes with 9a rice ladle.
When it became as sticky as jam, she added some fresh lemon juice in it.
After the completion, she compared it with the jam she had bought at the supermarket.
The jam she made herself was much more delicious.
Which made her so happy as to come to want her mother taste it.
When she brought it to her mother, her mother praised her.
"Wow this is delicious "
Which brought the confidence to her that it was really good.
Then, she came to want her grandparents taste it.
So she also brought it to them.
But they hadn't eaten any bread let alone jam.
At the first time they saw the jam, they told that it was creepy and like blood.
Yoshiko made an explanation that it was made from strawberries by herself.
Firstly they wouldn't eat it, but after the explanation, they tried eating it with a piece of bread. soa natural?
Adding some sugar, she mixed it for about 30minutes with 9a rice ladle.
When it became as sticky as jam, she added some fresh lemon juice in it.
After the completion, she compared it with the jam she had bought at the supermarket.
The jam she made herself was much more delicious.
Which made her so happy as to come to want her mother taste it.
When she brought it to her mother, her mother praised her.
"Wow this is delicious "
Which brought the confidence to her that it was really good.
Then, she came to want her grandparents taste it.
So she also brought it to them.
But they hadn't eaten any bread let alone jam.
At the first time they saw the jam, they told that it was creepy and like blood.
Yoshiko made an explanation that it was made from strawberries by herself.
Firstly they wouldn't eat it, but after the explanation, they tried eating it with a piece of bread. soa natural?
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3 ago 2016
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- Inglês (EUA)
Pouco natural
Yoshiko bought strawberries at a supermarket, and at her home, she washed and put them into a pot of water. Adding some sugar, she mixed it for about 30minutes with a rice ladle.
When it became as sticky as jam, she added some fresh lemon juice.
After she finished, she compared it with the jam she had bought at the supermarket.
The jam she made herself was much more delicious.
This made her so happy that she wanted her mother to taste it.
When she brought it to her mother, her mother praised her and said, "Wow this is delicious."
This made Yoshiko confident that it was really good and she wanted her grandparents to taste it. So she also brought it to them but they hadn't eaten any bread, let alone jam.
When they first saw the jam, they told Yoshiko that it was creepy and like blood.
Yoshiko explained that it was made by her from strawberries.
At first, they wouldn't eat it, but after her explanation, they tried eating it with a piece of bread.
:-)
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- Inglês (EUA)
Pouco natural
Yoshiko bought strawberries at a supermarket, and at her home, she washed and put them into a pot of water. Adding some sugar, she mixed it for about 30minutes with a rice ladle.
When it became as sticky as jam, she added some fresh lemon juice.
After she finished, she compared it with the jam she had bought at the supermarket.
The jam she made herself was much more delicious.
This made her so happy that she wanted her mother to taste it.
When she brought it to her mother, her mother praised her and said, "Wow this is delicious."
This made Yoshiko confident that it was really good and she wanted her grandparents to taste it. So she also brought it to them but they hadn't eaten any bread, let alone jam.
When they first saw the jam, they told Yoshiko that it was creepy and like blood.
Yoshiko explained that it was made by her from strawberries.
At first, they wouldn't eat it, but after her explanation, they tried eating it with a piece of bread.
:-)
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