Would you please proofread a part of my essay about "Language and Thought"



Yes, I think that language changes thought. I have reasons and examples to think so. For example, those who speak English tend to say clearly what they want to say. English does not have honorific. On the other hand, Japanese has honorific and a lot of expressions to consider other people. Japanese people cannot say clearly what they want to say. Therefore, when Japanese people speak English with native speakers, they may say their opinions, and they can deal with things positively. I think that this trend is also the case with other languages. For these reasons, I think that language changes thought.


Are these sentences natural?