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15 jan 2018
- Coreano
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Inglês (Reino Unido)
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It is my dairy. I need your feedback. 🙏
I tried Nike tranning plan. My plan is bodyweight only.
but I can only 3 steps. It's hard to me. So this plan is deleted. I start 30days press ups plan instead of Nike plan. It is great than bodywight plan.
I'll try bodyweight tranning after more exercise. The reason that fail is I don't have any streching. I think this is mistake for many beginner. So I'm okay. I can anything trying! Try! Challenge!
It is my dairy. I need your feedback. 🙏
I tried Nike tranning plan. My plan is bodyweight only.
but I can only 3 steps. It's hard to me. So this plan is deleted. I start 30days press ups plan instead of Nike plan. It is great than bodywight plan.
I'll try bodyweight tranning after more exercise. The reason that fail is I don't have any streching. I think this is mistake for many beginner. So I'm okay. I can anything trying! Try! Challenge!
I tried Nike tranning plan. My plan is bodyweight only.
but I can only 3 steps. It's hard to me. So this plan is deleted. I start 30days press ups plan instead of Nike plan. It is great than bodywight plan.
I'll try bodyweight tranning after more exercise. The reason that fail is I don't have any streching. I think this is mistake for many beginner. So I'm okay. I can anything trying! Try! Challenge!
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15 jan 2018
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- Inglês (Reino Unido)
You've done really well! and I can understand everything you were trying to say! There are a few corrections to make, so I will look at your writing sentence by sentence:
I tried Nike tranning plan.--> I tried (THE or A) Nike training plan.
My plan is bodyweight only.--> My plan is to do bodyweight only exercises.
but I can only 3 steps.It's hard to me.--> I can only do 3 steps because it is too hard for me.
So this plan is deleted. I start 30days press ups plan instead of Nike plan.
--> I changed my mind and will start a 30 day press up plan instead of the Nike plan
It is great than bodywight plan.--> it is better than the bodyweight plan.
I'll try bodyweight tranning after more exercise.--> I'll try bodyweight training after I have done more exercise.
The reason that fail is I don't have any streching.--> The reason I failed is because I didn't do any stretching
I think this is mistake for many beginner. So I'm okay.--> I think that many beginners make this same mistake, so I don't mind.
I can anything trying! Try! Challenge!-> (I can try anything! OR I can challenge myself to anything!)
I hope that helped you!
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- Inglês (Reino Unido)
You've done really well! and I can understand everything you were trying to say! There are a few corrections to make, so I will look at your writing sentence by sentence:
I tried Nike tranning plan.--> I tried (THE or A) Nike training plan.
My plan is bodyweight only.--> My plan is to do bodyweight only exercises.
but I can only 3 steps.It's hard to me.--> I can only do 3 steps because it is too hard for me.
So this plan is deleted. I start 30days press ups plan instead of Nike plan.
--> I changed my mind and will start a 30 day press up plan instead of the Nike plan
It is great than bodywight plan.--> it is better than the bodyweight plan.
I'll try bodyweight tranning after more exercise.--> I'll try bodyweight training after I have done more exercise.
The reason that fail is I don't have any streching.--> The reason I failed is because I didn't do any stretching
I think this is mistake for many beginner. So I'm okay.--> I think that many beginners make this same mistake, so I don't mind.
I can anything trying! Try! Challenge!-> (I can try anything! OR I can challenge myself to anything!)
I hope that helped you!
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