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- Coreano
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Inglês (EUA)
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Inglês (Reino Unido)
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Chinês Tradicional (Taiwan)
I am 28 yeard old.
I have a girl.
We just got married last month.
We have been together for about 3 years now.
I am currently living in Okinawa, Japan with my wife.
I have been here since last October.
Seoul is a big city.
I think the population of Seoul is a little less than ten billions people.
soa natural?
I have a girl.
We just got married last month.
We have been together for about 3 years now.
I am currently living in Okinawa, Japan with my wife.
I have been here since last October.
Seoul is a big city.
I think the population of Seoul is a little less than ten billions people.
soa natural?
- Inglês (EUA)
- Sueco
- Turco Quase Fluente
Pouco natural
Why did you jump over to Seoul from Japan?
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Evidentemente errado
A explicação não é suficiente
Está escrito em um idioma que não consigo entender
A resposta não está relacionada à pergunta
Outra razão
- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
Because i wanted to stay with my wife.
- Inglês (EUA)
- Sueco
- Turco Quase Fluente
Pouco natural
@Noburi But you wrote " I am currently living in Okinawa, Japan with my wife."
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Sueco
- Turco Quase Fluente
Pouco natural
@Noburi Do you mean that you wanted to stay in Korea with her instead of Japan?
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- Indonésio
- Inglês (EUA)
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lil bit correction, u may say: I am 28 years old. I have a wife (consider u just get married, u shouldn't say "i have a girl"). We just got married last month. We have been together for 3 years. Currently, I am living with my wife in Okinawa, Japan. I have been here since last Oktober.
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- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
No I don't mean it.
Sorry about some weird sentences.
What i tried to say is that because I wanted to stay with her, i came to japan last october and i just got married last month.
and thank you for your help.
I didn't realized I made some structural mistakes.
- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
- Indonésio
- Inglês (EUA)
- Inglês (EUA)
Pouco natural
I'm 28 years old.
I have a girlfriend.
We just got married last month.
We have been together for about 3 years now.
I am currently living in Okinawa, Japan with my wife.
We have been here since last October.
Seoul is a big city.
I think the population of Seoul is almost 10 million people.
There are 7.5 billion people in the world. I think you meant to say "million" because the population of Seoul is around 10 million.
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Português (Brasil)
Pouco natural
If you connected the info into less longer sentences it would sound more natural. As:
I am 28 years old and just got married last month. My wife and I have been together for about 3 years now. We've been living in Okinawa, Japan, since last October.
Seoul is a big city.
I think the population of Seoul is a little less than ten billion people.
I don't really see the connection between the two parts though.
Hope it helped! :)
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- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
There are so many teacher in this app including you!
and Thank you for your help.
It helped me a lot.
I am trying to saying something more longer than I did.
- Inglês (EUA)
- Português (Brasil)
Pouco natural
@Noburi You're welcome! A good tip for being natural is keep it simple! ;)
Ask anytime! :)
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