Question
23 jun
- Coreano
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InglĂȘs (EUA)
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InglĂȘs (Reino Unido)
Pergunta sobre InglĂȘs (Reino Unido)
Could you please fix my sentences?đđđ
I really want to make them sound casual a natural!!
How would you say this??
Please please brutally correct me
1. Relationships are funny. They seem super firm and solid but they really are fragile, easily broken more than anything else.
2. I really didnât want to get deeper with him because I donât see future with him.
3. He is too weak. it seems like he canât even protect himself.
4. I canât make a promise with him that I know I canât keep it.
5. English has been my number one priority but sometimes I canât help but ask myself "is it worth it to put in this much effort?". Yes it is of course. And besides for English, what else should I do?
(I know "what else should I do?" sounds a bit weird, I want to say English is the only thing I need to do)
Could you please fix my sentences?đđđ
I really want to make them sound casual a natural!!
How would you say this??
Please please brutally correct me
1. Relationships are funny. They seem super firm and solid but they really are fragile, easily broken more than anything else.
2. I really didnât want to get deeper with him because I donât see future with him.
3. He is too weak. it seems like he canât even protect himself.
4. I canât make a promise with him that I know I canât keep it.
5. English has been my number one priority but sometimes I canât help but ask myself "is it worth it to put in this much effort?". Yes it is of course. And besides for English, what else should I do?
(I know "what else should I do?" sounds a bit weird, I want to say English is the only thing I need to do)
I really want to make them sound casual a natural!!
How would you say this??
Please please brutally correct me
1. Relationships are funny. They seem super firm and solid but they really are fragile, easily broken more than anything else.
2. I really didnât want to get deeper with him because I donât see future with him.
3. He is too weak. it seems like he canât even protect himself.
4. I canât make a promise with him that I know I canât keep it.
5. English has been my number one priority but sometimes I canât help but ask myself "is it worth it to put in this much effort?". Yes it is of course. And besides for English, what else should I do?
(I know "what else should I do?" sounds a bit weird, I want to say English is the only thing I need to do)
Respostas
23 jun
Resposta destacada
- InglĂȘs (Reino Unido)
- Espanhol (Espanha)
Here are some "brutal" corrections:
- more easily broken
- I didn't see a future with him
- that I know I can't keep
- what's the point of doing anything else?

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