- Chinês Simplificado (China)
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Inglês (EUA)
As daylight began to fade, I picked Holly up from Susan’s home.Bidding farewell to her,Holly crept upon my car.I sensed the atmosphere was a little bit different.The black cloud of disappointment wandered around Holly’s eyes for a week seemed to disappear.Instead,they were filled with shameness. “How is Susan’s home?”I asked. “It’s great but…”Hesitating for a long time,it seemed that she was searching for a suitable word to describe it. “Beyond my expectation.You know,the whole family share one carpet simply because they can’t afford more.”Holly lowered her head.I unfolded the whole story of Susan.Holly was nearly to cry.Regret as she was,she didn’t utter a single word on our way home.
I placed the carpet on the table in front of her.With her mouth widen,Holly grabbed the carpet tightly and heartily.She burst into crying and murmured, “She was my best friend but I once hated her only for a present I don’t like but is precious to her.”I patted her trembling head and said, “It doesn’t matter.Holly.” soa natural?
I placed the carpet on the table in front of her.With her mouth widen,Holly grabbed the carpet tightly and heartily.She burst into crying and murmured, “She was my best friend but I once hated her only for a present I don’t like but is precious to her.”I patted her trembling head and said, “It doesn’t matter.Holly.” soa natural?
- Inglês (EUA)
Pouco natural
As daylight began to fade, I picked Holly up from Susan’s home.
As daylight began to fade, I picked Holly up from Susan’s home.
BiddingAs I bid farewell to herSusan, Holly crept upon my car.
BiddingAs I bid farewell to herSusan, Holly crept upon my car.
I sensed the atmosphere was a little bit different.
I sensed the atmosphere was a little bit different.
The black cloud of disappointment that wandered around Holly’s eyes for a week seemed to disappear.
The black cloud of disappointment that wandered around Holly’s eyes for a week seemed to disappear.
Instead, they were filled with shamenessshame.
Instead, they were filled with shamenessshame.
“How iswas Susan’s home?” I asked.
“How iswas Susan’s home?” I asked.
“It’s was great, but…” Hesitating for a long time, it seemed that she was searching for asomething suitable word to describe itsay.
“It’s was great, but…” Hesitating for a long time, it seemed that she was searching for asomething suitable word to describe itsay.
“Beyond my expectation. You know, the whole family share one carpetblanket simply because they can’t afford more.” Holly lowered her head.
“Beyond my expectation. You know, the whole family share one carpetblanket simply because they can’t afford more.” Holly lowered her head.
IAs unfoldedshe told the whole story of Susan, Holly was nearly crying.
IAs unfoldedshe told the whole story of Susan, Holly was nearly crying.
Holly was nearly to cry.
Holly was nearly to cry.
RegretRegretful as sheHolly was, she didn’t utter a single word on our way home.
RegretRegretful as sheHolly was, she didn’t utter a single word on our way home.
I placed thea carpetblanket on the table in front of her.
I placed thea carpetblanket on the table in front of her.
With her mouth widenwide, Holly grabbed the carpetblanket tightly and heartilytight.
With her mouth widenwide, Holly grabbed the carpetblanket tightly and heartilytight.
She burst into crying and murmuredtears, muttering “She was my best friend. but I once hated her, onlyonce. forOnly to be given a present I don’t like; but is precious to her.” I patted her trembling head and said, “It doesn’t matter., Holly.”
She burst into crying and murmuredtears, muttering “She was my best friend. but I once hated her, onlyonce. forOnly to be given a present I don’t like; but is precious to her.” I patted her trembling head and said, “It doesn’t matter., Holly.”
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- Inglês (EUA)
Pouco natural
As daylight began to fade, I picked Holly up from Susan’s home.
As daylight began to fade, I picked Holly up from Susan’s home.
BiddingAs I bid farewell to herSusan, Holly crept upon my car.
BiddingAs I bid farewell to herSusan, Holly crept upon my car.
I sensed the atmosphere was a little bit different.
I sensed the atmosphere was a little bit different.
The black cloud of disappointment that wandered around Holly’s eyes for a week seemed to disappear.
The black cloud of disappointment that wandered around Holly’s eyes for a week seemed to disappear.
Instead, they were filled with shamenessshame.
Instead, they were filled with shamenessshame.
“How iswas Susan’s home?” I asked.
“How iswas Susan’s home?” I asked.
“It’s was great, but…” Hesitating for a long time, it seemed that she was searching for asomething suitable word to describe itsay.
“It’s was great, but…” Hesitating for a long time, it seemed that she was searching for asomething suitable word to describe itsay.
“Beyond my expectation. You know, the whole family share one carpetblanket simply because they can’t afford more.” Holly lowered her head.
“Beyond my expectation. You know, the whole family share one carpetblanket simply because they can’t afford more.” Holly lowered her head.
IAs unfoldedshe told the whole story of Susan, Holly was nearly crying.
IAs unfoldedshe told the whole story of Susan, Holly was nearly crying.
Holly was nearly to cry.
Holly was nearly to cry.
RegretRegretful as sheHolly was, she didn’t utter a single word on our way home.
RegretRegretful as sheHolly was, she didn’t utter a single word on our way home.
I placed thea carpetblanket on the table in front of her.
I placed thea carpetblanket on the table in front of her.
With her mouth widenwide, Holly grabbed the carpetblanket tightly and heartilytight.
With her mouth widenwide, Holly grabbed the carpetblanket tightly and heartilytight.
She burst into crying and murmuredtears, muttering “She was my best friend. but I once hated her, onlyonce. forOnly to be given a present I don’t like; but is precious to her.” I patted her trembling head and said, “It doesn’t matter., Holly.”
She burst into crying and murmuredtears, muttering “She was my best friend. but I once hated her, onlyonce. forOnly to be given a present I don’t like; but is precious to her.” I patted her trembling head and said, “It doesn’t matter., Holly.”
everything else aside it was a pretty good
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- Chinês Simplificado (China)
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everything else aside it was a pretty good