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21 nov 2014
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1.Could you check if it's right?
I thought service industry is suit me according to the happiness I feel when
I gave a hand to others. ( 2. at this sentence is 'according to' natural? )
Since I felt unforgettable satisfaction as I've been working in service industry, I'm eager to be a worker in hotel offering services to more people than I served. That's the reason I applied for this job.
1.Could you check if it's right?
I thought service industry is suit me according to the happiness I feel when
I gave a hand to others. ( 2. at this sentence is 'according to' natural? )
Since I felt unforgettable satisfaction as I've been working in service industry, I'm eager to be a worker in hotel offering services to more people than I served. That's the reason I applied for this job.
I thought service industry is suit me according to the happiness I feel when
I gave a hand to others. ( 2. at this sentence is 'according to' natural? )
Since I felt unforgettable satisfaction as I've been working in service industry, I'm eager to be a worker in hotel offering services to more people than I served. That's the reason I applied for this job.
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22 nov 2014
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- Inglês (Reino Unido)
- Inglês (EUA)
- Chinês Simplificado (China) Quase Fluente
Corrections:
I think the service industry suits me as it makes me happy when I lend a hand to others. As working in the service industry gives me unforgettable satisfaction, I'm eager to work in a hotel offering my services to a wider range of people.
I have corrected the mistakes in the above paragraph, but I think it could be better! :) allow me to share what I think would be better:
I feel that I am well-suited for the service industry as I enjoy lending a hand to others. My experience working in the industry has always led me to feel immensely satisfied, which is why I'm eager to provide my services to a wider range of people by working in the hotel industry.
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- Inglês (Reino Unido)
I think that the service industry suits me as I feel happy when I lend a helping hand to others. It is also the sense of sastifaction which lead me to work in the service industry. I am eager to be part of the service team of your hotel which would allow me to provide my services to more people.
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- Inglês (Reino Unido)
When writing in a formal situation, avoid contractions ( I'm , isn't , won't....),
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- Inglês (Reino Unido)
- Inglês (EUA)
- Chinês Simplificado (China) Quase Fluente
Corrections:
I think the service industry suits me as it makes me happy when I lend a hand to others. As working in the service industry gives me unforgettable satisfaction, I'm eager to work in a hotel offering my services to a wider range of people.
I have corrected the mistakes in the above paragraph, but I think it could be better! :) allow me to share what I think would be better:
I feel that I am well-suited for the service industry as I enjoy lending a hand to others. My experience working in the industry has always led me to feel immensely satisfied, which is why I'm eager to provide my services to a wider range of people by working in the hotel industry.
Esta resposta foi útil?
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