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These days, there is a controversial problem among general public which is that social networking sites are protecting a little of user’s privacy while others argue it is out of role taking by the sites. So, users should watch out their privacy when they use it. I will discuss these points.

Firstly, I personally agree with the opinion which users should be more carefully in the case of using social networking services. It is because to protect own selves is fairly rudiment. For instance, we are taught to raise our hands when we across the traffic lights in order to not being crushed by a car or when we are in elementary school.

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However, looking back to the time when just social networking sites started to be popularized in the society, it was an unprecedented tool for communication. Prior to the groundbreaking invention, they normally used landline or sent only limited messages when they contact with someone. But, due to the easier way, a number of people tend to be addicted to use social networking sites. Furthermore, as a lot of people utilize it, the mind of them also changed to the negative way. As one example, there is a remarkably popular social media which is enjoyable posting pictures and getting “like”. It is exaggerated to say they seem frantic to be popular and eventually exposed private to get more attention.

Therefore, although it is essential for users to always keep in their mind to protect own privacy, it is also the site’s responsibility to do that as social networking sites make them blind from private security.

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However, looking back to the time when just social networking sites started to be popularized in the society, it was an unprecedented tool for communication. Prior to the groundbreaking invention, they normally used landline or sent only limited messages when they contact with someone. But, due to the easier way, a number of people tend to be addicted to use social networking sites. Furthermore, as a lot of people utilize it, the mind of them also changed to the negative way. As one example, there is a remarkably popular social media which is enjoyable posting pictures and getting “like”. It is exaggerated to say they seem frantic to be popular and eventually exposed private to get more attention.

Therefore, although it is essential for users to always keep in their mind to protect own privacy, it is also the site’s responsibility to do that as social networking sites make them blind from private security.

@freshriceroll thank you so much!!!!!