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WhatsUpAya
21 nov 2016

  • Japonês
  • Inglês (EUA)
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I went to a piano concert tonight. Each pianist has his or her own way of playing the piano and they are so impressive. soa natural?

Could you correct my English so that it sounds better?
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mehdi246
21 nov 2016

  • Inglês (EUA)
  • Urdu

Natural

ur english is totally fine

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appaappa9876
21 nov 2016

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Natural

its sounds perfect

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WhatsUpAya
21 nov 2016

  • Japonês
@mihuhi Could you tell me how to rewrite my English so that it sounds more natural?
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mihuhi
21 nov 2016

  • Inglês (Reino Unido)
  • Inglês (EUA)

Pouco natural

Usually, in English, it is expected that you use a particular tense, consistently throughout a sentence, paragraph or even the entire document/passage/essay. - E.g Past + Past = ✔ Present + Present = ✔ Future + Future = ✔ Past + Present = ✘ Present + Past = ✘ Future + Present = ✘ Past + Future = ✘ Present + Future = ✘ Future + Past = ✘ 「Tonight」を変えた理由は現在形からです。過去形に使っちゃだめです。 「今夜ピアノコンサートに行きました。それぞれのピアニストは特別な弾き方があるからすごいです。」　ー　これがWhatsUpAyaさんのげんぶんの翻訳です。時勢が違いますよね。それが問題です。二番の文が一番の文とつながっていないみたいなかんじがあたえてしまうので文に同じ時勢を使わないと意味が分からなくなってしまう時が多いです。 結果はこれになります。 "I went to a piano concert this evening. Each pianist had his or her own way of playing the piano and they were so impressive"。 そして「ur」をあまり使わない方が良いんですよ。「ur」は「you are」と全く同じ意味なんですがネットでしか許されない言葉遣いです。 Also, a note to the helpers in this thread. Could you please refrain from using colloquial language when possible? If you continue to use abbreviated words like "ur", you are unconsciously teaching others who read your comment the incorrect way of saying "you are".

Usually, in English, it is expected that you use a particular tense, consistently throughout a sentence, paragraph or even the entire document/passage/essay.

- E.g
Past + Past = ✔
Present + Present = ✔
Future + Future = ✔

Past + Present = ✘
Present + Past = ✘
Future + Present = ✘
Past + Future = ✘
Present + Future = ✘
Future + Past = ✘

「Tonight」を変えた理由は現在形からです。過去形に使っちゃだめです。

「今夜ピアノコンサートに行きました。それぞれのピアニストは特別な弾き方があるからすごいです。」　ー　これがWhatsUpAyaさんのげんぶんの翻訳です。時勢が違いますよね。それが問題です。二番の文が一番の文とつながっていないみたいなかんじがあたえてしまうので文に同じ時勢を使わないと意味が分からなくなってしまう時が多いです。
結果はこれになります。

"I went to a piano concert this evening. Each pianist had his or her own way of playing the piano and they were so impressive"。

そして「ur」をあまり使わない方が良いんですよ。「ur」は「you are」と全く同じ意味なんですがネットでしか許されない言葉遣いです。

Also, a note to the helpers in this thread. Could you please refrain from using colloquial language when possible? If you continue to use abbreviated words like "ur", you are unconsciously teaching others who read your comment the incorrect way of saying "you are".

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WhatsUpAya
21 nov 2016

  • Japonês
@mihuhi 詳しく指摘くださり、ありがとうございます。助かりました。
WhatsUpAya
21 nov 2016

  • Japonês
@mihuhi 　tonightとthis eveningの使い方以外はすべて学校で習ったことばかりなのに、間違えてしまいました。今、読み返して恥ずかしく思います。本当にありがとうございます。
mihuhi
21 nov 2016

  • Inglês (Reino Unido)
  • Inglês (EUA)

Pouco natural

@WhatsUpAya 大丈夫ですよ〜。失敗はだれでもするもんですから。勉強頑張って下さいね! ψ(｀∇´)ψ

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