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19 set 2018

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You will find out yourselves whose hearts were soft to them, when you received the first love they were soft, but now your hearts are hardened. soa natural?

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

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That sounds great! I'm sure your work will really help bring a lot of people into enlightenment; even I love seeing your questions on my feed. Keep up the good work; your english is really good! 👍

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

Inglês (EUA)

Pouco natural

I kind of don't understand the first sentences, cant you try to paraphrase it?

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

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But the last sentence should be, "… but now, your hearts have hardened.."

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Astrophil

19 set 2018

Coreano

@yo_hyacinth Thank you very much!!!
How about this?
Your hearts were soft to them when you received the first love... They were soft. But now, you will find out yourselves whose hearts are hardened.

'hearts are hardened' or 'they hardened their hearts' is from the Bible.

ohmyhya

19 set 2018

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Pouco natural

Mmhm.. I see, but what do you exactly mean by "receive first love"?

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

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Is "you" included in "they" or "they" is different from you"?

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Astrophil

19 set 2018

Coreano

@yo_hyacinth I really appreciate your kindness.

it's a part of a sermon and these words are religious, of course.

To receive the first love means that when you first believe in Jesus, you feel so happy and joyful that you think you can love all people in the world and everything looks great and grateful.

You means the audience, your hearts, your hardened hearts, and they are all the same.

ohmyhya

19 set 2018

Inglês (EUA)

Pouco natural

Oh alright I get it now, I'm sorry.. I have no religion so I don't hear sermons I only hear sermons from my mom 😕 But I do believe in God 🙂

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

Inglês (EUA)

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Hold on, let me read it again..

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

Inglês (EUA)

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Mmhm.. Your sentence is great! But I think it would be more appropriate to use the word "tender" than "soft"

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ohmyhya

19 set 2018

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Although, the latter statement is more natural than the former..

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Astrophil

19 set 2018

Coreano

@yo_hyacinth

So I don't hear sermons I only hear sermons from my mom

Great rhyme. haha

I'm really grateful for you help so far. You helped me a lot!!

Astrophil

19 set 2018

Coreano

@yo_hyacinth
Ah, in the Bible 'tender' is sometimes used as 'weak' like
Hear, Israel, ye are drawing near to-day to battle against your enemies, let not your hearts be tender, fear not, nor make haste, nor be terrified at their presence,

Thank you very much again!!!!!!

ohmyhya

19 set 2018

Inglês (EUA)

Pouco natural

You're welcome.. Are you paraphrasing the sermons? @Astrophil

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Astrophil

19 set 2018

Coreano

@yo_hyacinth Yes. I'm translating a sermon in Korean to English word by word.

ohmyhya

19 set 2018

Inglês (EUA)

Pouco natural

Oh that's nice.. Are planning to share it or something or just for language learning purposes? @Astrophil

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Astrophil

19 set 2018

Coreano

@yo_hyacinth
Well, I think it's for both. Now, I belong to an institution and my work is translating sermons. And it's also good for my studying. haha We're going to upload Korean sermon videos subtitled in English.