Perguntas sobre exemplo de orações com, e a definição e o uso de "Plstic"

A: × What would you do if there was a plstic piece in your bowl that you were eating at a restaurant.
✓ What would you do if you found a piece of plastic in the bowl you were eating from at a restaurant?

× My friend said that happened on her recently.
✓ My friend said this recently happened to her.

× She was with another friend that I hate.
✓ She was with another friend, who I hate, lol.

× lol The other friend was so up set and started yealling at the bring staff.
✓ The other friend was very upset and started yelling at the waiter / wait staff.

× Even it's not her meal.
✓ It wasn't even her meal.

× She said that the people around them started looking at her, because she's so rude and amasingly crazy person in Japanese lol She felt embarrassed with her.
✓ My friend said that people around them started staring at her because she was being so rude and surprisingly crazy for a Japanese person, lol. She felt embarrassed by her.

× After that my friend sent an Email to the headquarter about it, because she didn't want to pay for it.
✓ Afterwards, my friend sent an email to restaurant management about the incident because she didn't want to / didn't think she should have to / pay for the meal.

× But she said to the stuff nothing at the restaurant.
✓ Yet she said nothing to the staff when she was at the restaurant.

× Both all are stupid in my opinion.
✓ Both of them are stupid in my opinion.

× The headquarter's stuff came over to her house and apologized, and bring snacks for showing their feeling.
✓ The management staff came over to her house and apologized, bringing snacks/gifts to express their sentiments.

× Could you guess what the person I don't like, said to that ?
✓ Can you guess what the person I don't like had to say about that?