Perguntas sobre exemplo de orações com, e a definição e o uso de "Globalization"

A: No the first sentence is incorrect because “can trace back” is the wrong tense and should be “can be traced back”

The meaning of that phrase is that history can be studied and looking through time the origin is...

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A: @lanosh: What is globalization?

A: × As globalization proceeds, every kind of mutual interdependence becomes deeper and deeper.
✓ As globalization ①progresses, ②[all interdependencies] ③[become deeper and deeper/deepen].


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①to me it sounds more natural to use "progresses" here, even though "proceeds" makes sense. I think, personally, if it doesn't have the power to move on its own, then using "proceed" doesn't quite seem to fit.

② It's okay to just use the plural noun to generalize -"interdependencies." But, if you want to stress that "every one" is included, you can use the suggestions as is.

Apples - can be 1 type, a few types, or ALL types of apples
Interdependencies - can be just one interdependency, or many, or all.

something that is interdependent is by definition mutual, so you don't need to say mutual interdependence.

③A lot of times, adjectives also have a verb form that means "becoming more and more [adj]"
ex, becoming:
madder and madder - madden
thinner and thinner - thin(verb)
wider and wider - widen
darker and darker - darken
etc.

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Finally, this sentence is kind of difficult, there are a lot of words in here that have multiple forms, sooo here are some other ways to write this:

*"As the world globalizes, everything becomes more deeply interdependent." (this is how I would express this idea)

"As the world becomes more globalized, interdependencies of all aspects will deepen."

A: Also, more directly:
How do we deal with/cope up with globalization?

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A: Almost, try saying: "With the globalization that is affecting on low and high context societies, people have a lot of opportunities to interact with individuals of other cultural backgrounds. In order to communicate with each other effectively, they need to learn about different cultures, and people in high context societies in particular must be able to use other languages with more fluency. This way, they can be understood in a more accurate manner."

A: The sentence sounds understandable.

(If you are asking the question) I think it works both ways. Globalization can harm domestic employment by creating more competition, but it can also lead to advancements in technology and science. This leads to more capital and an increase in jobs.

A: Only change I would make is when you say "embrace the trend & seek for cooperation with other economic participants", I would change it to "embrace the trend and seek cooperation FROM other economic participants"