Perguntas sobre exemplo de orações com, e a definição e o uso de "Iata"

A: IATA predicts that airline industry will have grown more than double for 20 years. Especially, they say that the Asia-Pacific will have the biggest growth. Under the influence of fourth industrial revolution, airport will become smarter and more advanced into high-tech industry. But, in spite of these changes, i think cabin crew’s smile and service-mind can never be substituted. So I will provide warm-hearted service with consideration for others.


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1. IATA predicts that airline industry will have grown more than double for 20 years.
Replace “for” with “in” to make this sentence sound natural. You might also want to make “industry” plural, unless you are going to specify an airline industry.

“IATA predicts that airline *industries will have grown more than double *in 20 years.

2. Especially, they say that the Asia-Pacific will have the biggest growth.
Here you might want to reconstruct the sentence.

“The Asian-Pacific especially, is expected to see the biggest growth.”

3. Under the influence of fourth industrial revolution, airport will become smarter and more advanced into high-tech industry.
Here you are missing a few small words like “the” or you need to once again make the words plural (meaning more than one).

“Under the influence of *the fourth industrial revolution, *airports will become smarter and *advance into high-tech *industries.”

4. But, in spite of these changes, i think cabin crew’s smile and service-mind can never be substituted.
Here you need the same short “the”s and some more plural/non plural revisions, and that’s about it. 😊

“But, in spite of these changes, *I think *the cabin *crews’ smile and *service-minds can never be substituted.”

5. So I will provide warm-hearted service with consideration for others.
The question is, are you the cabin crew? Are you meaning “we,” the plural version of I. You need to decide what you are trying to get across at this point and follow through with it. Here are some examples I figured you could’ve been trying to say:

“So *we will *continue to provide warm-hearted service with consideration for others, *for many more years to come.”

“So the *airline industries will *continue to provide warm-hearted service with consideration for others.”



I put * everywhere that I made changes. Hope this helps. 😊👍