Perguntas sobre exemplo de orações com, e a definição e o uso de "Awaji"

A: × I went to Awaji island last week.
✓ I went to Awaji Island last week.

× Despite weather report said it would rain, it was fine weather and so beautiful sunset on the sea.
✓ Despite the weather report / forecast / saying it would rain, the weather was fine and the sunset on the sea was very beautiful.

× We could enjoy fresh food and nice landscape for 2 days.
✓ We enjoyed fresh food and (the) nice / gorgeous / breathtaking / landscape for 2 days.

× We went fishing port where was developed for fishing fun.
✓ We went to a fishing port which was designed for recreational fishing.

× We went there and ask some questions
✓ We asked some questions

× about fishing condition for next time.
✓ about fishing conditions for next time.

× What kinds of fish we can take?
✓ What kinds of fish could we (expect to) catch?

× But the manager in the port could not answer clearly because only little fishermen have come due to fierce heat and no data for current fishing situation.
✓ But the manager at the port could not answer clearly / could not give us much information / because only a few fishermen had come by due to the intense heat, so he didn't have much data about current fishing conditions.

A: Just one minor adjustment...
--> "red tide *occurs* when..."